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Well the __w__ampanogs are starting to build __there__ homes, and the __p__ilgrims were getting __of__ the Mayflower.The Wampanog's spent sometime on building houses.The __Wmpanogs dont__ have a big __seltion of__ crops.There was an __Wampanog__ named Johnno and there was a boy named Zachno.They tried __there__ hardest to keep __there__ families going. Zachno went out to hunt __why__ Johnno stayed home taking care of __there__ crops and __there__ garden.

Zachno had ran into the __p__ilgrims when he had __ben__ hunting. He had no idea what was going on. They __enter there selfsand they talked__. Zachno came home __2__ __if you are writing out the the time I would just write out the two and a half hour late.(This doesn't make sense)__ Our mom, Jessaicano was not happy.

"What Happened?" said Jessaicano confused.

Zachno __replaided,__ "I meet __p__ilgrims. "They seam really nice."

Johnno asked Zachno to take me to the pilgrims.Rewrite sntence like: Johno told Zachno, "Take me to the Pilgrims." e were on are way to the __p__ilgrims, when we finally we got there.We were,talking they are nice after all. We teached them how to grow crops,and other stuff like growing fish__.__Well(When) we met an indian named, sqanto. He teached the Pilgrims how to grow fish faster .What do you mena by, 'how to grow //fish// faster) He put a fish on the corn and coverd the hole back up. (I do not get what this sentence is saying, what hole? The wampanogs and pilgrims helped each other buid there houses. The wampanog named Zachno, always spent time in the garden, growing crops and corn and other stuff to I would put: growing corns and other Johnno always with somthing like building other wampanogs houses. Jessaicano was always cooking dinnir for Johnno and Zachno. If she did not have dinnir done by 6:00 they would be mad.They worked __so__hard during the daywhen you say: so hard during the day. It makes you seem like you are leading up to something put something like: They worked awfully hard during the day).When they come home they usaley eat take a shower and go to sleep.When its morning Jessaicano wakes them up and they wake up and get ready to start the day.They start the day. Well johnno goes to buy a large sack of corn.Zachno goes to talke about Thanksgivng. Well the wampanog girls and the pilgrim girls were cooking the feast for thanksgiving.It is only 2 days away to thanksgiving. The Wampanog boys and the pilgrim boys worked all day.The girls are perparing for the thanksgiving like siting the tables out and putting food on them.The wampanogs are trying to grow crops beans corn and other stuff.The pilgrims and some of the wamoanogs when't to hunt.Johnno and Zachno went to hunt.Johnno shot two rabbits and four dear and a turky. Zachno shot one rabbit and three turcky.They were on there way home and Johnno and Zachno said can you throw this stuff on the fire rack so it can cook. Jessaicano said why did you give me this stuff at the last moment.We are so so sorry but we just cot this stuff. I will try to get this stuff done in time. Now the feast is to day at 6:00 colck. Thetables are all sit for to night. The feast is started and every body is eating wild turcky,rabbit,dear,fish,corn. They are going to have this food for svreale weeks. Now the feast is over and every body is living so they can go home and go to bed. It is tommrow and the wampanogs have two more days left of work. They get to do what ever they want like hunt and sleep in.Now to day is there last day of work and they got alot of corrge to stop working. Zachno and Johnno said they did not want to stop working and they wanted to help there mom.Johnno said he wanted to stop working after 2 days so he can do what ever he wanted. Zachno said I will keep working so he can buy more corn. The day just endned Zachno and Johnno went home at dinnir with there mom then they went to take a shower then they went to bed. Zachno woke up about 6:00 this moring. He went to work when Johnno was still a sleep.He went to build some more wetus and some cottages. Johnno woke up and looked for Zachno. I looked at the time and I was late for work. I was on my way to work. I just arrived and my boss said your late and he said do you know what that means your fired. Zachno said he was sorry like a thosand times and Johnno said thats not good enogh. It was getting late so they were on there way home. They both ate dinner with there mom and then all of them went to take showers and get ready for bed.Zachno told his mom he mest up with his brother big time. She said how i got him fired for not waking him up.

The End.